Titanium

Titanium      

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Learn

Click on the URL below and watch the short clip.

Titanium

 

Before you start writing Watch up till 1.15, think about what has happened? What has caused this? Why?

Create  

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of the boy.

Success Criteria

We need to focus on these things

• Full stops, capital letters,
• Paragraphs
• We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.

To start with you will write a description of the first scene, use the show not tell technique to create thoughtful writing. You are writing through the eyes of the boy.                              These are our sentence tools today -

Sentence 1 - If, if, if, then

Sentence 2 - 3_ed

Sentence 3 - 2A

Sentence 4 - Where opener

Sentence 5 - Adverb opener

Sentence 6 - Short sentence

Sentence 7 - Tell: show 3 examples;

Sentence 8 - Short sentences

Here are some examples

 

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Go to this padlet Titanium and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similes and metaphors.

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If  I had stayed home, if  I had not gone to school early, if I hadn’t got bullied, then I wouldn't be terrified  when  the alien’s came to the school. I was scared and  worried .A  teacher was terrified that I had trashed the  school     and a police officer came to the school. Sitting on the ground in the hall I felt angry.I quickly ran out the  door  and  I lost control.  I was terrified.  Controlled by an alien; making poor choices; my mind was confused

I needed to escape……

The police surround  my house   with their guns  I used my  super

powers  to  grab the keys  to unlock   the backdoor  ran out the  backdoor into a dark forest    I  could hear stick  breaking.   The  police  surround  me with their  guns  they point them at my head  and told me to get down to the   ground  I put my hand behind my back to make my superpower work.   When  I get down to the ground  and when I look  like a ball   that when  my superpower