The piano

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man's point of veiw as ge recalls his memories.

The piano
I am an old man I love to play the piano  when I was playing the piano I started to remember stuff like  when I was in the army and my brother got shot in the arm I had tears ran down my face  .  an like when  it was my 8th birthday  I got an toy horse and gave it to my 5 year old grandson  . Now I  started  to remember some happy we would the play the piano together and when we went to  Bali  and when we were in bali  we went to   a  water park and we went down the big  water slide and when  we stayed at   a nice hotel it was as beautiful as a flower and it was as big as  the sky tower   it was a long  flight  home  me and my wife  sat on the plane for ages   a  few days later  my wife    just fainted in my arms  and so I called the ambulance  and they said that she had an heart attack  and said that  they have some sad news   you might want to sit down  am sorry but she has past away  she died in her sleep  i’m very sorry.  I started to cry I was very sad that she died.   But  you could of did something  so that she could stay alive . It was the next and it was her funeral  and there was a lot of people  and it was my turn to do my speech so I said my speech then I sat down  I had tear ran down my face   I was really  sad . It was the next  day  I  wasn’t  feeling well  so I went to the doctors the said that I have cancer and I have  bowl   so I was going to die soon  I just told them that my wife just die   a few days  ago and they said well that was very sad   they ask how  she  died   I   said that she had of a heart attack   it was the next day I felt  week  and cold    I think it is time for me to die then I just fell   to the  ground   and  there was  a knock at the door   it was my   grandson and my daughter    they said hello but there was no answer so they came in they found me they took me to   the hospital   and said that they found me on the    ground  s they said the doctors  sorry but he has past away .