Tuesday, June 27, 2017
Measurement
Tuesday, June 13, 2017
Titanium
Titanium
Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.
Learn
Click on the URL below and watch the short clip.
Before you start writing Watch up till 1.15, think about what has happened? What has caused this? Why?
Create
WALT write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of the boy.
Success Criteria
We need to focus on these things
- Full stops, capital letters,
- Paragraphs
- We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.
To start with you will write a description of the first scene, use the show not tell technique to create thoughtful writing. You are writing through the eyes of the boy. These are our sentence tools today -
Sentence 1 - If, if, if, then
Sentence 2 - 3_ed
Sentence 3 - 2A
Sentence 4 - Where opener
Sentence 5 - Adverb opener
Sentence 6 - Short sentence
Sentence 7 - Tell: show 3 examples;
Sentence 8 - Short sentences
Here are some examples
Go to this padlet Titanium and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similes and metaphors.
Share
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.
If I had stayed home, if I had not gone to school early, if I hadn’t got bullied, then I wouldn't be terrified when the alien’s came to the school. I was scared and worried .A teacher was terrified that I had trashed the school and a police officer came to the school. Sitting on the ground in the hall I felt angry.I quickly ran out the door and I lost control. I was terrified. Controlled by an alien; making poor choices; my mind was confused
I needed to escape……
The police surround my house with their guns I used my super
powers to grab the keys to unlock the backdoor ran out the backdoor into a dark forest I could hear stick breaking. The police surround me with their guns they point them at my head and told me to get down to the ground I put my hand behind my back to make my superpower work. When I get down to the ground and when I look like a ball that when my superpower
This week my number is
WALT I learnt that my number is even.
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