My goal was to find the underworld I have been trying my hardest to find the underworld. Then one day I found a crack in the ground it was quite big and someone said come down here I went down and I finally found the underworld it was really awesome to find it. Then I heard a big boom I went back up to see what was going on there had been and explosion because someone was testing an experiment and added the wrong ingredients. When I got home my dad had a surprise it was a hover scooter it went super fast.
Thursday, June 20, 2019
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ReplyDeleteHello Taesha! I like how you put full stop and capital letter in the start of you setences.I like how you put in Capital and your full stop how many sister do you have.
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