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Friday, August 18, 2017

The magician

T3 Week 4: The Magician
You will be working in a Tuakana/Tēina pair for this writing task and you will be working collaboratively to create an exciting piece of writing
Before you start: Make a copy of the file and save it in your tuhituhi folder. Name it “W4 The Magician” (then your initials)   
Learn:
Here is the link to the padlet: The Magician - PadletThe Magician.png








Before you start think about these questions:
  • What mood do you think the magician is in?
  • Do you think he is a good or evil character?
  • If you could have magical powers, what would you choose to be able to do?
  • What do the words at the top of the picture say?
  • Who lives inside the house?

Create:
Key tasks:
  • You need to set the scene, what does it look, feel, smell like?
  • Describe the characters, who are they? Why are they there?
  • What is the action that is taking place in your writing?
  • At least 4 sentences must contain a “relative clause”.
  • Use the show not tell technique to create thoughtful writing.
  • Create suspense and tension as the magician carries out his plans.  
What does a relative clause do?
  1. It splits the main clause.
  2. The clause begins with ‘who’, ‘which’ or ‘with’.
  3. It must supply an extra bit of information to the sentence.
  4. Commas should surround the clause.
E.g. The magician, who had incredible powers, strode confidently across the marble floor.
WALT: To include relative clauses in my writing.

I will know I have done this when I have:
  • Used who, which or with in my writing
  • Used commas to separate my clause

Share:
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.



The magician

Hello my name is the magician. I do magic across the county. I have a good of magic show. I am a magician with an evil laugh  I am as wicked as a witch.

I am going to a magic competitions. It is  windy as a storm. I wear my best top hat my best coat and my best white t-shirt.  There were things floating in the air so that’s how I it was the competitions.After I was in the building. I sweat magic gorily because I was in the most popular competitions places you can do magic.

I was a bit scared of losing  because that would make my collection of  medals and I will have less of metals  


I have won every magic show I have been too.I have been to the fabulous magic show and the competition.

It was the big day it was the competition and many more.But this one was the weirdest one I have been to.

There was a pram in the air, a umbrella in the air, and much more in the air than you could imagine. I was just in time for my turn on the stage so I was nervous and stressed.I said to myself “I can do this and I won't give up”.

I was stressed and happy. The crowd was cheering for us “hip hip hura”. I was next on stage I was a bit nervous and happy the the person how call your name to go on stage he called my name. I felt like running but I said no to myself “no”.

What a great show I came first place. I was really excited that I  came first place because I  have never got 2nd place of 3rd place . It was the most beautiful thing ever because it was the most popular magic place ever.

Friday, August 11, 2017

whale fantasia


  

As I   swam out  to  cold icy water with my friends we swam around and had a look around the blue ocean . The  water was as bubbly as hot boiling water .

We got to a dark place it was as dark as  night time,   we saw a big   whale. The skin was as rough as concrete. We started to  swim around with the whale. The whale was as big as a giant.
  
 We saw a lot of fish,  some were small  and some were big.   The whale   started to do tricks  it was amazing    what the whale could do.   It  jumped up out of the water then  it  came back in the water.
Me and my friends    joined in and  started to do some tricks with him.

The splash was as loud  as an   elephant  walking  .


We started to swim some more  and  we saw a big shark  the  shark was as big as a  truck  .



We  swam as fast as we could because we were terrified  of the shark.   We  quickly swam into a   cave   the cave was as  dark as a black cat.


All of  that swimming made  me tired and hungry  so I went home and had some food and then went to bed.

Thursday, August 3, 2017

but then the flash made me .

When I was sitting on my couch I saw a bright flash. It was  my mum’s car light’s.  She  had left them on  all night. BOOM!.  The light  went out,  it made me blind.  I couldn't see at all  I was  terrified . I told my mum that the car lights were on.   But I couldn’t see where she was   so   I didn’t   tell her she call me up stair and told  me to go   to bed. The next day I said to her “ last night   you left your car lights on and it was really bright. It made me blind.




Tuesday, August 1, 2017

kayak

*Screenshot the finished image
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Step 2
Describe your design
I.e. “I have chosen a blue Slalom K1 kayak with a blue base and a red outline. I have chosen to place 5 yellow stars at the front of my kayak and a large triangle at the back.”
I have  chosen a black slalom C2 with a blue outline and   a fist  and a hexagon and a small love heart .


Step 3
Describe who would buy your design
I.e. “I believe this kayak would be liked by teachers who want to get into kayaking. The paintjob is simple, but still pretty cool looking.”

My dad will buy my kayak because his  blue is his favorite colour . my mum will buy my kayak because  she like  flower and love hearts and they will take it down to the lakes.

Tuesday, June 13, 2017

The Roro

Titanium

Titanium      
Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.


Learn
Click on the URL below and watch the short clip.


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Before you start writing Watch up till 1.15, think about what has happened? What has caused this? Why?



Create  
WALT write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of the boy.

Success Criteria
We need to focus on these things
  • Full stops, capital letters,
  • Paragraphs
  • We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.
To start with you will write a description of the first scene, use the show not tell technique to create thoughtful writing. You are writing through the eyes of the boy.                              These are our sentence tools today -
Sentence 1 - If, if, if, then
Sentence 2 - 3_ed
Sentence 3 - 2A
Sentence 4 - Where opener
Sentence 5 - Adverb opener
Sentence 6 - Short sentence
Sentence 7 - Tell: show 3 examples;
Sentence 8 - Short sentences
Here are some examples
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Go to this padlet Titanium and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similes and metaphors.

Share
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.
If  I had stayed home, if  I had not gone to school early, if I hadn’t got bullied, then I wouldn't be terrified  when  the alien’s came to the school. I was scared and  worried .A  teacher was terrified that I had trashed the  school     and a police officer came to the school. Sitting on the ground in the hall I felt angry.I quickly ran out the  door  and  I lost control.  I was terrified.  Controlled by an alien; making poor choices; my mind was confused
I needed to escape……
The police surround  my house   with their guns  I used my  super
powers  to  grab the keys  to unlock   the backdoor  ran out the  backdoor into a dark forest    I  could hear stick  breaking.   The  police  surround  me with their  guns  they point them at my head  and told me to get down to the   ground  I put my hand behind my back to make my superpower work.   When  I get down to the ground  and when I look  like a ball   that when  my superpower

This week my number is

  WALT    I learnt   that  my number is even.

  




Friday, May 5, 2017

Somalia

As I was having a cup of coffee  at six o'clock in the  morning .  I could hear  waves  crashing against the  ship.   Then  I could  smell  stinky   clothes of  pirates then I look out the window  and I could see pirates boarding  the   ship.

They  went and looked in the containers  to see what was in them. but there  was nothing.  One of the  pirates went into the captain room and said hand over the keys so I did  then he said do you know  who  I  am?  Then he started  to steer the ship  as the  pirates  were looking in the  containers.

Suddenly some  robots came out. The  pirates  got scared and one  of the robots  tap the pirate on the shoulder  and said hand over the  keys. So he did  then he showed the pirate   what the robots were doing to his crew. They made them sit on their knees and with their hands behind their heads.  They had to do what the robots told them to do.


Then one of the robot  gave the captain the  keys and the hat then the robots waved goodbye  and went back in their   containers

Then the captain let the pirates go and told the l pirates not to do it again.













                                                                                                   





 


basket boats

Story Review
WALT: summarise the main ideas of a text.  

Answer all these questions



Title: Basket boats

Author:Jill macgregor

Summary of the story:
How do you make the boat or earth paint?
  • You use bamboo and weave it



Facts: (Write something that you found wow and interesting).


Wow:
  •   That the boys had to do the job before school

Interesting:
  •  That the boats don’t sink.


Vocabulary (Choose 2 words you didn’t know, google them and write their meanings.
1.
Dusk .darker stage of twilight.
2.
Rim the upper or outer edge of an objec

Friday, April 7, 2017

Tom true heart

One day I was on a mission to save  my six brother and their  princess brides.

It was my job to save them from an mean man  that was trying  to kill them.  I had a magic sword  that   was going to help me  save  them.

if I pointed the sword at people  it will kill them . I went through  a   dark  forest to  get  their .

My sword can help me fly to a dark  castle   where they  were  kept  so I went there  and because I was as small  as a thumb I could  squeeze through a  door without been seen

 When know one was around I would use my sword to make me grow bigger  so I could recuse  my six brother and their princess brides.    They have been   captured because they were trying to steal
His  golden diamond  so he  captured  them.
When I got there  they were  tied  round  a pole .
So I got my  bow n arrow  and shooted    it at   the man  to put him to sleep why I   went  into save them.  I cut the rope  and told them to hop on  my bird .



The man started to wake up   he look around he said  dame they have gone,  in an evil  voice .



So I quietly went around the  back of the castle without him    knowing  so I said quietly to my bird come here  so he did   and we went home  without him  looking at us.

I said’’ to my brother “why   were they   trying to   steal his  golden   diamond?”  My brother said “because   he  stole it from dad.”

Thursday, March 16, 2017

Pangarau DLO

video
This is my DLO about how to add using the larger number first. I hope you enjoy it.

Tuesday, March 7, 2017

Te reo maori 2017


Kia Ora whanau , this is my collection  of whakatauki   and what they mean.  I hope you enjoy  reading  this  I will  be  adding a  new slide every week